Everything Wrong With Dusk’s Dawn in 4 Minutes or Less by LittleshyFiM

LittleshyFiM brings us a new Cinema Sins parody, based in the fan-made animation: Dusk’s Dawn, this animation doesn’t have a “very” good reception in the fandom, all this maybe is for the mistakes of animation/sounds/editings/etc….

But whatever, in a more personal view for the original video and the creators, I recommend this phrase: “The quality is always better than quantity”. These different errors can work as an intuition and experience for make better animations and videos.

So… keep it up your work guys! persistence is the key to success.

Prepare your popcorn, because you will have a funny parody that’s below.

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Duhad
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Hey, hate to call you out on this, but your little write ups are a bit… well not very grammatically correct. As a dyslexic, I have ALLOT of trouble with that kind of thing myself, so can I suggest something that works well for me?

There is a free program called “ReadPlease 2003”, it basically just has your computer “read” any text you copy/past into it. Download that, then when you write up one of these posts, copy/past it into ReadPlease and hear back what it sounds like when its read back to you, I almost guarantee that you will catch most of your writing hiccups that way! : )

Anyway, sorry if that sounded at all insulting, but I love your sight and want it to see it improve in anyway it can!

Usbac
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Thanks for the suggestion Duhad, today I haven’t much time for correct those little details as I’ve been doing it before.
Greetings!

Duhad

No worries, these things happen and where all busy people. At any rate, its nice to know you take less then positive feed back well!

Keep up the good work and try not to get to overwhelmed!

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